D: OMG! MORE POEMS! RUN.. RUN AWAY! :3 anyways, for english we had to write more poems, this time two poems with fifteen lines, for some reason these ones came easier to me then the ones I posted yesterday, and personally, I like these ones more (<.< >.> but I love my sinful one to death(sorta), even if it sucks). Unlike the first set, I had some requirements for these two, I had to use at least one metaphor, simile, and rhyme, and vivide descrption (or something like that, but it was needed in the first two too *shrugs*) Since words like that make my brain hurt, if you actually read the poem (and if you know what they mean) could you make sure I included 'em? Please and thanks. Ummm.... For the first poem I had to force my self not to include the line "maybe she's sad, and maybe she's hurt, all because she was treated like dirt" because I would've got that from another poem... .______. and that's BAAAAAAD! And the second poem, I'm kinda implying the girl/woman/whateva is Chinese (was inspired by a social studies packet) and I know Chinese people have black/dark brown eyes, not blue but I wanted to add the word cheongsam, and I envisioned it to be blue... and etcetc....

D: That has to be one of the LONGEST descriptions I've ever written, thank you if anyone actually read the whole thing, it makes me feel speical!

Poems © me

Things to come:
1) A "100 sumitted works of art picture" (yes, this is the 100th thing I've submitted on DA, that's freakin' awesome!)
2) A picture to go along with my second poem (I just started it, but it inspired the poem)